Wednesday, April 28, 2004

Notes

* Middle aged sales guy, married, no kids, large car, home life is "boring", no spark left
* goes out on the road
* seen leaving the house, little interaction with his wife
* orders dinner to go at a local diner
* see pretty girl at the opposite end, eating alone
* he thinks she is flirting with him, she has some distinctive mark (tattoo, ring, etc)
* pays for dinner, leaves, forgets credit card
* back at hotel room, picks at food, deceides to take a shower
* while in shower, knock at door, he doesn't hear, note under the door
* out of shower, he sees note
* note something about seeing him, call number
* thinks about it tosses notes
* watches tv
* gets note from garbage
* plays with phone, wathces tv, sees a sexually suggestive show on tv
* picks up phone, calls
* "I'm glad you glad, i'll be right there"
* hang up
* knock at door
* she enters, kiss at door
* she leads him to bed, kiss, pushes him down on bed
* she removes her shirt and lays down on him -- fade to black
* 2 flash pops
* morning, he awakes, find bra, note and a poloroid
* he feels guility
* calls number, says he can't meet anymore, she deamands payment
* he panics and hangs up
* checks out; can't find wallet
* call wife to pay for room
* wife upset
* home, wife asks about missing walet, unanswered phone call from night before
* work, envelope is dropped of from "some girl", inside is his credit card
* he thinks its from the girl, she must have his wallet, she is playing some game, he panics
* home, wife finds bra in bag, wife gets poloroid in mail
* confrontation
* he in garage with car running, hose in window, dead
* hand passes envelope to girl, pan back to wife giving the envelope
* guy in car falls forward, head on horn, shows bullet hole in back of head.

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